英语作文

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【精华】英语作文三篇

【精华】英语作文三篇

在日常学习、工作或生活中,大家都不可避免地要接触到作文吧,写作文是培养人们的观察力、联想力、想象力、思考力和记忆力的重要手段。还是对作文一筹莫展吗?下面是小编整理的英语作文3篇,仅供参考,大家一起来看看吧。

英语作文 篇1

空调病 The Illness From Air-condition

When summer comes, the air is stuffy and the temperature is so high. Thanks to the invention of air-condition, people are no longer suffer to the hot weather, they can stay at the indoors and enjoy the coolness that air-condition brings. But the problem comes, when people count on air-condition for a long time, their bodies will be weaker. Some people feel dizzy and have no strength to do their work, some people are easy to catch the cold. All of these symptoms are typical illness which is from air condition. Though air-condition brings us comfort, we will get sick if we use it all the time. We need to go outside often, even is hot, what’s more, taking exercise is needed. The natural environment is suitable for us to live in, we can’t count on air-condition for a long time.

当夏天到来的时候,空气很闷热,气温也很高。多亏了空调的发明,人们再也不用忍受闷热的天气,他们可以呆在室内,享受着空调带来的凉意。但是问题也来了,当人们长时间依赖空调,他们的身体会变弱。一些人感到眩晕,没有力气去工作,一些人很容易感冒。所有的这些症状都是空调带来的典型病。虽然空调给我们带来了舒适,但是如果我们长时间使用空调,就会生病。我们需要经常走出室外,即使天气很热,也需要参加锻炼。自然的环境是最适合我们居住的,我们不能长时间依赖空调。

英语作文 篇2

一、提炼字词句

一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素,就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样,如果砖瓦质量不好,那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的,如果基本的词句掌握不好,那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手,甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有存货造成的。

因此,从现在开始,我们应该重视字词句的提炼,把我们学过的,见到过的甚至在新闻,广播,杂志,电影里见到的优美的、地道的词句提炼出来为我所用。一般来说,我们掌握了初中教材要求的大部分词汇以及考纲中全部词汇和词组,写出一篇合格的作文并不是难事,然而,面对如此激烈的竞争,仅仅是一篇合格的文章就够了吗?恐怕不是的。因此,掌握更多的优秀词句能让我们在写作中出彩。我们可以从作文素材中进行词句的提炼:

第一个资源,也是我们最容易忽视的资源,就是我们手中的教材。

教材文章难度适中,词汇丰富,是非常好的词库。也许有的同学不以为然,那么我们看这个句子:A比B要美得多。如果让你用英语写出这个句子,你能想到的句型有几个?在你想到的句型中,是不是转来转去就那么几句:A is more beautiful than B, 或者A is more beautiful when compared with B , 或者B is not as beautiful as A……这样的句型你会写,还有数万个和你一样的中学生也会写,但是如果你写出:Although A is beautiful, it pales when it is in comparison with B. (虽然A很美,但是与B相比便黯然失色了。) 这样的句子,效果会大不相同。

第二个资源,基于教材,我们可以向外发散,任何你读过的报英文刊杂志,比如《21st Century》《China Daily》等等,都是很好的资源,还有很多经典的英文电影,英文歌曲也都是丰富的词库,从中可以提炼出非常多的优美的词汇和句子,改造一下,就可以放到我们的文章中,为我们的作文增色不少。

第二、巧用过渡词

所谓过渡词,就是表示先后顺序的first, second,….at last,表示因果关系的as a result, due to, because of…,表示分述关系的what’s more, furthermore, besides, in addition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇?原因有二:其一,我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律,但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系,快速而精准的判断你的文章呢?

过渡词就是一个很好的向导,它能够引导阅卷人的思路,让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价;其二,我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候,总有一个先后顺序,总有一个逻辑结构,如何使自己的文章结构清晰,要点明确,中心突出,答案还是过渡词,使用了过渡词,可以规范自己的逻辑思路,让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱,有条不紊,层次清晰,逻辑通畅。

第三、句式多变

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的I think简单句,那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味,乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以,我们在写句子的时候,要尽可能的变换句式和结构,让文章富于变化,错落有致。具体地说:中考作文中,我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句,主要是宾语从句,状语从句以及尝试变化语态。

例如,08年中考北京卷作文题,以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。例文给出的句子是…he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hours to safety. 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句:saving two of his classmates, Lin Hao walked for seven hours to safety.如果再加上语态的变换,还可以改写成:Being saved from the earthquake, two of Lin Hao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao. 这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的`话,一定会增加阅卷人的青睐,从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。

第四、善用名人名言

在中考作文中,很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的,富有哲理和智慧的句子,经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天,足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言,那将会是怎样一番景象,其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了Just as the saying goes, ‘every coin has two sides.’,那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水平考试作文里写出了中国人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚,祸兮福之所伏’一样的震撼!

因此,学会使用名人名言,将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了,使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托,这一是因为自己平时积累不够,写不出合适的名人名言,第二是对名人名言没有形成条件反射,联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下,看看效果如何。

总之,冰冻三尺,非一日之寒,练习写作也是一样,三天打鱼两天晒网是不行的,必须得持之以恒的练习,才会有进步。上述的技巧也是要建立在练习的基础之上的,否则没有办法深刻体会,更何谈自如运用?只要勤加练习,相信每一位同学,都能取得巨大的进步!

英语作文 篇3

The most precious thing is life, life for everyone only once, love life, civilized travel, traffic safety is the continuation of life, is the happiness of the family, don't let the noise of the traffic accidents take a beautiful and innocent life.

That terrible accident has how many people have died?How many people were injured?How many people to pain?Who lost his dearest parents and those who lost their dear children, some people lost their most intimate partner...Is this still can't make us alert?

May be an oversight when crossing the street, may be a drunk driving, can also be a feat of red light, will lose the lives of others or yourself.'ll see the site of some of the horrible scene, can let yourself or someone else's parents, wife and children cried.

Life is precious.Life for only one time, each of us.So should cherish life, like the film "Titanic" the hero said: "every day".To be sure, cherish life not forbear survived, is not death, not suspicious, not at all, but the heart is magnanimous, aboveboard, maintain a healthy mental state, not a fool, not passing, science pleasant to learn to live.Naturally, if there is a "tradeoff" life and justice, we should also do as what mencius said "image".Some words seem to be going too, but also not had nothing to do with the topic.This is the first requires us to obey the traffic rules, their safety travel.

Life is precious to safer, longer, more brilliant!We must remember "ning and other three points, just for a second!"This sentence.The lessons of the blood can only on one occasion, tragedy can't repeat itself, nor the second life.Let every one of us cherish life, safe trip!

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